Bob the hedge-corn

The Treasure Box.

-The treasure box-

I can see people who 

Are horrified because our village

Has been burnt to pieces

The smell of fear and ashes fall from the sky

From the people who have died

And burnt

I hear children who are sobbing

It makes me feel worried but happy 

Because i will be safe.

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As we slowly walk away from our village, children start crying and wondering
why are we leaving our village this makes me feel heartbroken because they
have no clue about what's going on.

Everyone is really exhausted, probably because we have been walking for
what feels like decades. Although everyone is tired we still need to
keep going. I feel really tired and worried, I also feel cold,
really cold. I always get a headache and my brain feels like it's going to
explode.

After a long cold painful walk we find a village. It didn't look as bad as I
thought it would. Men are already going back to the bombed village including
my dad. I really wanted to go but he said no son it will be dangerous. Although
he said no my friend and I feel confident enough to go back.

It was pitch black outside. Which my friend and I thought would be a great
time to go, We snuck out and surprisingly made it out. We hid behind a few
trees. Once we got back to our bombed village we could straight away see
men fighting the enemy. I see my dad on the ground. My friend tries to
find a way to help my dad, but I stand still, I'm stunned.

I can see,hear,smell and fell

This piece of writing has come from a book that we are studying in drama. The Book is called The Treasure Box. This writing was captured from an image taken from the book. Keep posted for the rest of the nice story.

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