Morning tea time:
L.I-use more interesting words and complex words
What I did at morning tea (10:45)
At morning tea time I went to the top court to practice soccer skills with my friends Moonia and Harley.We practised doing high kicks and then catching the ball, we tried doing soft kicks and then catching it, we practised running up fast and quickly blocking the ball when they are so close to getting the goal, we practised passing the ball to each other
We finished practicing doing soccer stuff and we then played,catch,piggy in the middle with Veronica and Roneeza and then played basketball which was funny .But there was a problem people didn't like us playing in the top court because they couldn't block the goal so we felt sad and a little angry.But then we decided to go behind the top court to play some Dodgeball!,we did soft throws for good safety
But a few minutes later the bell rang so we stopped playing dodgeball and went back
to our classroom doors.
Nice work Summer! I Love your descriptive writing. It would be great to make your writing a bit bigger but keep up the good work. Best of friends Anamaria Room 8 St. Patrick's School
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