In
the holidays it was my Daddy’s birthday.
For Daddy’s birthday I gave him my card.
I had made the card myself. I
gave him my card. He said, “Thank you
Summer”, and he gave me a big hug.
Later
on my Mum and my sister came back from Aaron’s birthday party. Aaron is my sister’s friend from Child’s Time
Play School. Then we all got ready to go
to the movies at Sylvia Park.
The
movie was called Inside Out. The main
character was called Riley. It was a
cool movie because there were some interesting characters inside Rily’s
head. They were called Joy, Sadness,
Anger, Disgust and Fear. They were the
best people inside Riley’s head.
When
the movie was finished we went to Sylvia Park Mall to have dinner. For dinner I had a mince and cheese pie, but
the rest of my family had a burger each and a big cookie. My pie was yum and my family said that their
burgers and cookies were yum too.
After
eating we went to the shop to buy a big cake for Daddy’s birthday. We bought Daddy a big chocolate cake. Then we went home to eat the cake. Later, while we ate the cake, we watched
TV. After watching TV we went to sleep. That was the best day ever. I hope someone in my family has a birthday in
the next lot of holidays.
By
Summer
Hey Summer, I like your writing its full of loving for your dad, and you must of had heaps of fun. Keep up the good writing.
ReplyDeleteHey Summer, I like your writing its full of loving for your dad, and you must of had heaps of fun. Keep up the good writing.
ReplyDeleteWell done Summer, very proud of your writing skills - keep it up darling - love you :)
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