I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Ms. George.
Monday, 21 March 2016
The Magic Horse by Summer
Learning Intention- W.a.l.t.. write a narrative story.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write a narrative story about a magic horse.
Long ago I was asleep in my room and a magic rocking horse came through my window. It was very small. "Where would you like to go? I can take you anywhere,"the horse said.Then I told the horse where I want to go, but my mum woke up and asked if I'm ok."Yeah, I'm fine",I said. "I'm just trying to find my best toy friend". My mum said goodnight.The magic horse took me outside. There was a big bang and the horse grew and grew up to the sky.It was so big that the whole family woke up and they all asked what happened? The whole family climbed up the big magic horse and they found a girl giant house with another giant.The girl giant said "fe, fi, fo, fum" " I see a little family as one." "Hello Miss giant can you help change my horse become small again?", I asked. The horse and my whole f,amily went back home and didn't know it was morning. We all had dinner and went back to sleep. We will look after the magic horse, until we can find its mother and father.
Wednesday, 16 March 2016
Wednesday, 9 March 2016
Wednesday, 14 October 2015
In The Holidays
In
the holidays my family and I went to King of the Mountain. First my mum and I went to get some food for
the race. Next my coach said it was my
turn to go in the race. In the race I
ran so fast.
After
that we ate some food at the King of the Mountain to have a break. Then we went out to dinner at a KFC restaurant. I had some chips and a burger.
Later
we went home to have a rest. At home I
played with my toys. I played in my
bedroom. Finally we went on the computer
to play Minecraft. In Minecraft I made a
shopping mall and a pet shop. In my pet
shop there were cats and dogs. In my
shopping mall there were toys, phones, food, and beds for when you are
tired. If two cats or dogs are fed together
they make a baby. After playing
Minecraft, it was time for bed. I had an
awesome day!!
Monday, 27 July 2015
Daddy’s Birthday
In
the holidays it was my Daddy’s birthday.
For Daddy’s birthday I gave him my card.
I had made the card myself. I
gave him my card. He said, “Thank you
Summer”, and he gave me a big hug.
Later
on my Mum and my sister came back from Aaron’s birthday party. Aaron is my sister’s friend from Child’s Time
Play School. Then we all got ready to go
to the movies at Sylvia Park.
The
movie was called Inside Out. The main
character was called Riley. It was a
cool movie because there were some interesting characters inside Rily’s
head. They were called Joy, Sadness,
Anger, Disgust and Fear. They were the
best people inside Riley’s head.
When
the movie was finished we went to Sylvia Park Mall to have dinner. For dinner I had a mince and cheese pie, but
the rest of my family had a burger each and a big cookie. My pie was yum and my family said that their
burgers and cookies were yum too.
After
eating we went to the shop to buy a big cake for Daddy’s birthday. We bought Daddy a big chocolate cake. Then we went home to eat the cake. Later, while we ate the cake, we watched
TV. After watching TV we went to sleep. That was the best day ever. I hope someone in my family has a birthday in
the next lot of holidays.
By
Summer
Tuesday, 2 June 2015
Mother's Day
On Mother’s Day I gave my mum the card that I had made for her at school. My mum loved my card and she gave me a big kiss and a hug. I was happy and she was happy too. Then my family and I went to church.
After church my dad and I went to a shop to buy some presents for my mum. We bought her a bow, a hat, a dress and a bag. Later my family and I went to a café to have some breakfast. I had some pancakes and my mum had a burger. My pancakes were yum.
After that we went home. Then my mum opened her presents. I asked her if she loved her presents. She said, “yes I love them”. We were all happy.
On The Weekend: A Narrative
On the weekend I went to my nana’s house because our house had a fire. When the fire happened my family was trapped in our bedrooms. I was the only one who was not trapped. I got down, I got low and my cat Rocky followed me. Rocky moved slowly because the fire was in front of him. So he moved to the side. I got to the phone and I dialled 111 and asked for the fire brigade.
The fire brigade man told Rocky and I to go and stand at our letterbox outside. He told us to crouch down to get out of the house because the fire was above us. When we got outside we ran to the letterbox.
Then the fire engine arrived and they hosed our house with water and got my family out of the house. Next the ambulance arrived to look after my mum because her arm was a little bit burnt. My dad had a little burn on his leg. The ambulance people looked after my mum and dad. They are all better now.
It was a busy night and we were all very tired. Because our house had been burnt down we all slept at my nana’s house. She was pleased that we were all OK and so was I.
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