L.I-We are learning to write an recount.
Success Criteria:I know I am successful because I know I can write paragraphs with 4-5 sentences.
At my Aunties
YAY! Sleep over time!.
In the holidays I went to my Aunties house.We said hello to everyone.In late afternoon we had Junk food and watched a scary movie.It was night time when the movie was over so, we played hide and seek in the dark.We had so much fun because we hide in a really dark place and my cousins couldn't find us.But then my sisters got scared,so we turned on the lights and ate Ice-cream.
After that we all went to bed.I slept with my cousins in the same room and we stayed up late because we were playing on our Ipad. Then we all feel asleep because we were tired.The next morning we got up early had breakfast.We ate Coco Pops, Nutrigrain and Crunchie nut.It was a yummy breakfast.Later we packed up and said goodbye and went home.
I had a blast!
I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Ms. George.
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Tuesday, 28 June 2016
how to plant a seed
How to plant a seed
L.I.-W.A.L.T.-write instruction in order.
Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I can write instruction in order how to plant a seed and using action words at the beginning of each sentence.

Materials:
yoghurt pots, sheep fertilizer ,watering cans, seed, soil, water,
Steps:
1. Punch holes in the yoghurt container.
2. Write your name on the sticky paper.
3. Put the sticky on the yoghurt container.
4. Put soil in the container.
5. Make a hole in the soil using your pointy finger.
6. Then get a seed and put it in the hole.
7. Cover the hole with soil.
8. Water the seed.
9. Leave it in the sun to grow.
L.I.-W.A.L.T.-write instruction in order.
Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I can write instruction in order how to plant a seed and using action words at the beginning of each sentence.
Materials:
yoghurt pots, sheep fertilizer ,watering cans, seed, soil, water,
Steps:
1. Punch holes in the yoghurt container.
2. Write your name on the sticky paper.
3. Put the sticky on the yoghurt container.
4. Put soil in the container.
5. Make a hole in the soil using your pointy finger.
6. Then get a seed and put it in the hole.
7. Cover the hole with soil.
8. Water the seed.
9. Leave it in the sun to grow.
Tuesday, 3 May 2016
Fire fighters are my heroes
L.I-W.A.L.T-local heroes.
Success Criteria-I know I can do this when I can write an argument about our heroes the fire fighters.
Fire fighters are my heroes
I agree that fire fighters are my heroes, because they put out fire . When a car is on fire they put it out.
They also make sure the fire won't go on houses.
They tell us what they do.
They teach us how to be safe around fire.
We get down ,get low on the floor and get outside and shout fire! fire!and wait next to the mail box.
They get people out of the car when they're stuck during accident.
When people can't breath, they call the ambulance so they can be taken to the hospital.
I like fire fighters and they are my heroes.
Success Criteria-I know I can do this when I can write an argument about our heroes the fire fighters.
Fire fighters are my heroes
I agree that fire fighters are my heroes, because they put out fire . When a car is on fire they put it out.
They also make sure the fire won't go on houses.
They tell us what they do.
They teach us how to be safe around fire.
We get down ,get low on the floor and get outside and shout fire! fire!and wait next to the mail box.
They get people out of the car when they're stuck during accident.
When people can't breath, they call the ambulance so they can be taken to the hospital.
I like fire fighters and they are my heroes.
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